Akward seeing the one you loved?

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Teen Poetry #7

Akward seeing the one you loved?

chica61891
New Member

since 2005-12-04

Posts 1
H-Town

0 posted 2005-12-04 10:30 PM

No matter what happened between ya'll you know its akward to see him everyday i know it was for me when i ride the bus each morning:

Akward on the bus!

I hope to get on the bus hoping things wouldn't change but, as I glanced at you i said to myself "things aren't the same". When I looked your way I hope you would smile and say hey. What happened to us doesn't it feel akward sitting on the bus? Lets be friends or at least get along every now and then. As you got up to get off I looked your way and when you walked on by I smelled yuor colonge that you wore when we were together each and everyday. I have to get used to riding the bus even though that there is no us.

Dedicated to sum 1 that was very special to me but found someone else <3 <3 <3

young_blood
Senior Member

since 2003-09-19

Posts 1115
Indianapolis, IN

1 posted 2005-12-05 12:18 PM

this is a poetry forum. go find the prose forum. i am a mean person. grrrr....

punkrockerrobin

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since 2001-05-15

Posts 1180
Sparks, NV

2 posted 2005-12-16 09:03 PM

i kinda agree with young_blood this really isn't a poem. but an ok write

hi my name is robin and i am addicted to poetry and men!
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SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

3 posted 2005-12-17 12:27 PM

actually...she just didn't use line breaks but if you read it....*ahem* it does rhyme. It is poetry, and the both of you know that personal attacks are NOT allowed.

and with that Chicka...welcome to pip!

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DestinedSuccess
Junior Member

since 2005-11-16

Posts 12
California,

4 posted 2005-12-17 01:12 AM

actually sea has a good point, it is hard seeing the one you loved for the first time after you two broke up.. at least your didnt end with the cops like mine did...good write

tearsoflove13762
Member

since 2004-09-05

Posts 488
Texas.. and yes i have an accent

5 posted 2005-12-18 12:53 PM

i agree w/ sea but line breaks help! well welcome to passions anyhow and i alsow know how you feel

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