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CrAzI_bAbI_cHiKa
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since 2003-07-16

Posts 248

0 posted 2005-10-27 04:30 PM

his lies were anchored in his tears
as i tore his stable life in two
...i smiled.

anger screamed from his pores
as i battered what remained
of my once loving husband
...i left

lovers gazed into the night sky
the night i left my man.
hand in hand they sighed
content with what they alone owned.
...i sighed

child in hand, i left him.
and arriving upon my destination
(originally being nowhere)
...i cried.

not for what i lost
nor for what i gained
but for all we'd had to overcome
and for all that was still left
...i became strong.

CrAzI_bAbI_cHiKa
Member

since 2003-07-16

Posts 248

1 posted 2005-10-31 10:29 PM

No opinions??

I might have messy hair, runny makeup and a tear-steaked face, but at least I know I have loved.

Kaos
Member

since 2001-08-02

Posts 317
between space and time

2 posted 2005-11-11 01:28 PM

Very strong piece. Nice job portraying the difficulty and the mixed emotions of a hard situation like that, and also showing how things can get better. It's also good to see positive things come out as well. Good write as usual. :-P

"Do not go gentle into that good night,
Old age should burn and rave at close of day;
Rage, rage against the dying of the light"
-Dylan Thomas

intention
Member

since 2005-11-13

Posts 59
New Delhi, INDIA

3 posted 2005-11-15 08:24 AM

i read this poem today and awesome words u have written ..

Love me for who i m

tearsoflove13762
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since 2004-09-05

Posts 488
Texas.. and yes i have an accent

4 posted 2005-11-15 07:59 PM

it speaks ... loudly wow i always love what u write
laura

LOVE NEEDS TO DIE

CrAzI_bAbI_cHiKa
Member

since 2003-07-16

Posts 248

5 posted 2005-11-15 09:01 PM

Thanks SOOO much for replying...

Michael my man, you're adorable, thanks for always replying<3 love!!!

Intention, i love your comment, the way u said it reminds me of yoda!

and LAURA!!!! its sooo good 2 see you around again, its been awhile..<3<3 thanks so much for your comment!!

all three of you just totally brightened my day, in case you couldnt tell...i love u guys!!!!<3

thanks! i needed that!<3keryn

When I'm good, I'm very good. But when I'm bad I'm better.
Mae West

CrAzI_bAbI_cHiKa
Member

since 2003-07-16

Posts 248

7 posted 2005-11-16 06:30 PM

...thanks Hellabounds!

\m/ rock on<3

lol -ker

When I'm good, I'm very good. But when I'm bad I'm better.
Mae West

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