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Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

0 posted 2005-09-10 12:25 PM

Like the great falls of Niagara,
My love drips a thousand thoughts,

No likeness of my love exists,
For it will be an epic tale,

When I leave this place,
Many others will try,

Climb the mountain of love,
And not look back,

Knowing that you can only fall once,
But if you succeed,
You can climb yet again,

Love never forsakes us,
It is our vision that is blurred,

You abandoned the path,
And now you claim u are lost,

Making a mockery of yourself,
Your parade your lost love,
As if it was a battle scar,

Do not lead love,
Let it lead you,

Bless the day you find love,
Donâ€™t look back and think what if-

Give it your all to sustain it,
Even if it means your life,

Share this with the one you love,
Only if you will not pull out,
Give up and admit defeat,

Like the bumble of a thousand bees,
My love is known throughout,

No one point did my love fail,
Only, I hesitated.

I speak insanity. I write fantasy. I sleep reality.

aussie teen
Member

since 2003-09-27

Posts 396
Australia

1 posted 2005-09-11 06:46 AM

thankyou thankyou thankyou... this is exactly what i needed... i have been asking for signs, and you are it... thankyou thankyou thankyou... well written
Ruth

live life as if your going to die tomorow....... but love as if your going to live forever......

Dopey Dope

Moderator

Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

2 posted 2005-09-11 05:24 PM

"Climb the mountain of love,
And not look back,

Knowing that you can only fall once,
But if you succeed,
You can climb yet again"

What I know:

This confused me. If you climb the mountain of love without looking back, knowing you can only fall once........*and here is where i got lost*...if i succeed i can climb again?

So are you saying, succeed in falling? And why is that a good thing?

What I feel:

I felt the poem was good. It got better towards the ending.

You wrote this well.
keep it up, brotha

javier~

StarryEyed3
Member

since 2005-06-26

Posts 58
bostonia

3 posted 2005-09-15 11:14 PM

mm so refreshing... something happy. thanks so much

"and i'll sit and wonder of every love that could have been
if i'd only thought of something charming to say..." -death cab

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