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BeckzBoo
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since 2005-07-14
Posts 10


0 posted 2005-08-28 12:45 PM


All you can do is lie there,
Fighting the hardest you'll ever have to fight,
Never knowing whats going to happen next.
But your fighting with all that you've got,
Sometimes it feels that it just isn't enough.
But were all routing you on,
And we know you can win this battle.
That seems like it's never going to end.
But hold on my dear cousin,
This is a roller coaster ride,
It has it's up's and down's.
But always remember,
No matter what happens.
I'll be here.


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Kaos
Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 317
between space and time
1 posted 2005-09-01 10:20 AM


nice write, good support piece

"Aerials,   in the sky,
When you lose small mind,
You free your life."
- System of a Down

CrAzI_bAbI_cHiKa
Member
since 2003-07-16
Posts 248

2 posted 2005-09-06 09:19 PM


I really lIke this! Well-written!

<3<3Keryn

(sorry for the shortness of the comments, im outta it tonight<3)

You know? I thought you were smart...But you cant see what is directly in front of your face...

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