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Android 17

Senior Member

since 2001-07-21

Posts 664
Winnipeg

0 posted 2005-08-24 04:36 AM

          ... opposite ends ...
     ... black and white ...       ... colors never seemed so tasteless ...

... spektrums of ignorance ...
              ...
           ... your eyes no longer see me ...
     ... cold shadows hide best ...
             ... as long as they don't see me ...
          ... mine don't see you ...

   ... clarity in it's best ...
              ... tears shed light on the unbiased ...
             ... the unbiased only mourn dispair...

     ... this was never ...
                           ... fair ...

... bak to bak ...
      ... it's all behind ...
                 ... eyes can't see bakwards ...

          ... nor do they want to ...

The deeper we go, the harder it gets.

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

1 posted 2005-08-24 01:57 PM

I loved this, the words, format, exceptional work, not to mention, very emotional perspective, and a gentle way to say, we are so different....

Bravo!!!!

skoolyardturtle
Member

since 2005-06-28

Posts 96

2 posted 2005-08-24 01:58 PM

This was awesome. it's good to see you posting again.

[This message has been edited by skoolyardturtle (08-24-2005 03:57 PM).]

Android 17

Senior Member

since 2001-07-21

Posts 664
Winnipeg

3 posted 2005-08-24 03:19 PM

Thanks guys! I tried having this one abit less of an enigma than the others!

LoveBug

Moderator

Member Elite

since 2000-01-08

Posts 4697

4 posted 2005-08-24 07:29 PM

I love this! It's so beautiful.. I love the format, the spelling of the words and how it works with what you are saying. I'm glad to see you around, it makes me smile!

Love's a lovely lad
His bringing up is beauty
Who loves him not is mad
For I must pay him duty
-Anonymous

StarryEyed3
Member

since 2005-06-26

Posts 58
bostonia

5 posted 2005-09-15 11:33 PM

this is amazing. i loved the style. thanks so much!

"and i'll sit and wonder of every love that could have been
if i'd only thought of something charming to say..." -death cab

Android 17

Senior Member

since 2001-07-21

Posts 664
Winnipeg

6 posted 2005-09-21 01:35 PM

Thank you all so much for your comments!

Pollita
Member

since 2002-07-25

Posts 220
the unknown realm of insanity

7 posted 2005-09-24 12:17 PM

This is really...different. In a great way though. I can't really find any other word to describe it as except for "Alexerish"

Great work dear.

Android 17

Senior Member

since 2001-07-21

Posts 664
Winnipeg

8 posted 2005-09-25 12:59 PM

I don't think that's a word. But you seem to make up words using my name...

Keke...ko?

Skyfire

Member Elite

since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

9 posted 2005-10-07 05:55 PM

*hugs*

Kaos
Member

since 2001-08-02

Posts 317
between space and time

10 posted 2005-10-09 05:08 PM

a very pleasurable read... i've always enjoyed reading works done in this style and what not thanks for the read

"Do not go gentle into that good night,
Old age should burn and rave at close of day;
Rage, rage against the dying of the light"
-Dylan Thomas

Android 17

Senior Member

since 2001-07-21

Posts 664
Winnipeg

11 posted 2005-10-16 11:40 PM

Thanks!!!

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