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young_blood Senior Member
since 2003-09-19
Posts 1115Indianapolis, IN 
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love's forms cheap jewelry and heavy make-up doesnt matter to us grown up kids. days of holding hands on the swings are all we live for now. gifts of grasshoppers and barbie dolls showed the passion welling inside these small bodies. "cool" neckalces and carefully placed make-up defines who we are to one another. nights of "passionate" kissing are the things we search for now. presents of cut glass and rings for fingers showed the "love" that keeps us tied together. no more adornments to cover ourselves for we a re far beyond that bit. our nights are spent talking over our kids and the lives they'll live. our offering is our time, the years spent in true devotion, they show love, real love not just feeling, but a lifestyle of sacrifice |
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Deep_Inside Member
since 2002-02-14
Posts 377i can't stop hiding |
this was "cool"(as how ever you want to take it) i like the idea of going from "cheap jewelry and heavy make-up" to "no more adornments to cover ourselves for we a re far beyond that bit" it really interresting to see that transition. i like this. keep righting |
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Why Junior Member
since 2003-09-26
Posts 32Middle of nowhere |
this is a very nice poem it reflects human nature very well. i look forward to reading more like it |
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dertah Senior Member
since 2003-06-18
Posts 584 |
ha ha, good write. reminds me of someone i know. |
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