Teen Poetry #7 |
afterthoughts |
StarryEyed3 Member
since 2005-06-26
Posts 58bostonia |
and we watch the stars barely visible and solely unbruised as my heart bleeds into the very river in which i am drowning we grab and reach and claw for everything we can see and nothing fits anymore into my swollen grip you run away, erasing your sandy footprints with even bigger steps so many emotions but not enough time and too too much uncertainty, for the sea erases everything but tears |
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electricxheart Member
since 2004-09-05
Posts 184far away from home. |
I am in loveee with the ending. You write so beautifully...never stop. -Kelly |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Julie~ This is truly lovely~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
Sigh... Yes we all know this one lol. Keep it up. Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic |
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WinterWren Senior Member
since 2002-12-01
Posts 1044...Coming to |
Wow. This is so amazing. I don't think I can fully express right now how much I love this. Perfect art. This is going in my library, thanks for sharing. If I could fall asleep tonight |
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