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Teen Poetry #7

Spun

Match
Member

since 2002-07-01

Posts 286
Canada Edmonton

0 posted 2005-07-17 01:36 AM

Dusty Dancing particles
Floating off my tounge.
Kissing.
Soft seeping shine filled lips,
Waiting for my pores.
Inhale me you toxic friend,
Keep me cancer,
Never let me go.
Dancing,
Kissing,
Spinning,
SPUN.

Im sorry i've failed you all.

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2005-07-18 01:12 AM

this was very confusing!

Match
Member

since 2002-07-01

Posts 286
Canada Edmonton

2 posted 2005-07-19 01:23 AM

yeah, sorry about that.

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

3 posted 2005-07-19 01:26 AM

don't be sorry

just because I didn't "get it" doesn't mean that others won't...

tearsoflove13762
Member

since 2004-09-05

Posts 488
Texas.. and yes i have an accent

4 posted 2005-07-19 06:21 PM

hmmm... i dont get it either but dont feel bad sometimes that happens. i am sure it has some inside meaning to you

LOVE NEEDS TO DIE

* shining star*
Member

since 2005-06-29

Posts 76
PA,USA

5 posted 2005-07-19 09:09 PM

it's a good poem...i just dont really get it.

-Smile, it's not a sin.

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