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Teen Poetry #7

Don't shed a tear in fear

* shining star*
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since 2005-06-29

Posts 76
PA,USA

0 posted 2005-07-14 11:57 PM

You fight the same fight
Every day and night.
You show know sadness
or no madness.
Just hold back what you really feel.
Just get down and kneel,
and pray that it gets better.
I have wrote you so many unseen letters.

I wait for you to come back,
in this broken down shack.
I see these tears
that have been the same for years,
but yet I fear
that you will not win you game,
don't be ashamed.
You have overcome that battle,
that is not won.

-Smile, it's not a sin.

BeckzBoo
Junior Member

since 2005-07-14

Posts 10

1 posted 2005-07-15 12:05 PM

I really like this one..very deep.

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2005-07-15 10:52 AM

"I have wrote you so many unseen letters."

understand that

CrAzI_bAbI_cHiKa
Member

since 2003-07-16

Posts 248

3 posted 2005-07-16 08:48 AM

Again..Don't be a slave to rhyming, although I liked this one better than other one. one line in particular...

"I have wrote you so many unseen letters."

Been there, Done that. Yesterday, and possibly tomorrow...Sigh.

More enjoyable, but I still think you have better in you, I feel like you have so much potential, you just need to push yourself over the edge....but, hey, what do I know? Possibly, and most Probably nothing.

<3

I cant believe how long i waited
for the boy to turn into my man...

Now if i could figure out, if it was worth the wait.

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