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tearsoflove13762
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since 2004-09-05
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Texas.. and yes i have an accent

0 posted 2005-07-07 04:34 PM



Looking deeply into your seductive blue eyes,
visions of us together, my only paradise,
your arms wrapped around me so tight,
would be the perfect moment,
nothing short of just right,
your body's gentle caress against mine,
that sexy little smile when you look at me,
no other guy can compare, I want you to see,
wanting you to be all mine in every way,
your the only one in my thoughts everyday,
it would be my fantasy my dream come true,
the day I can say that I have you (again)

© Copyright 2005 Laura Risner - All Rights Reserved
skoolyardturtle
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since 2005-06-28
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1 posted 2005-07-07 04:52 PM


nice...sometimes you want something so bad you can almost feel it...i know the feeling
SarBear
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since 2003-06-05
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Massachusetts
2 posted 2005-07-07 09:25 PM


this is great. it's very descriptive and creates imagery.
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