Teen Poetry #7 |
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tearsoflove13762 Member
since 2004-09-05
Posts 488Texas.. and yes i have an accent |
Looking deeply into your seductive blue eyes, visions of us together, my only paradise, your arms wrapped around me so tight, would be the perfect moment, nothing short of just right, your body's gentle caress against mine, that sexy little smile when you look at me, no other guy can compare, I want you to see, wanting you to be all mine in every way, your the only one in my thoughts everyday, it would be my fantasy my dream come true, the day I can say that I have you (again) |
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skoolyardturtle Member
since 2005-06-28
Posts 96 |
nice...sometimes you want something so bad you can almost feel it...i know the feeling |
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SarBear Member
since 2003-06-05
Posts 205Massachusetts |
this is great. it's very descriptive and creates imagery. |
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