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thinktwice
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since 2003-12-23
Posts 125
United States

0 posted 2005-07-07 03:24 AM




hey now,
turn yourself,
shift yourself,
repeat yourself.

is.
it was.
you are
the excuse.

what will never,
what has ever been
used for a reason,
will die in it's own sea,
in it's own lies.

is.
was.
you are
the excuse.

downward, a spiral,
breathe it in.
eternally yours.
deviation proceeds,
sound off.

turn yourself,
shift yourself,
repeat yourself,
again and again.



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SarBear
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since 2003-06-05
Posts 205
Massachusetts
1 posted 2005-07-07 01:24 PM


that's really good. i liked your rhyme scheme

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