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tapper798 Member
since 2003-07-20
Posts 353My own world 
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Don’t you see the impact, Of your stupid little games? Don’t you see how much she hurts, And it’s herself that she blames. Her mind is always wondering, Her heart always in pain. The tears of hurt and tears of joy Have now become the same. Each song is a memory for her, Memory of things she’d like to forget. She’d like to know that In your mind, She’s more than just any bet. She sings the sad tunes aloud and strums the dead cords of her song, she’s so sick of trying for you. She’s been trying for so long. She’s so much better of a person Than you’ll ever know. By the time you see this sorry fact, She'll have finally let go. -Erin AIM-blueyed angel940 She's a question without answers... |
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SarBear Member
since 2003-06-05
Posts 205Massachusetts |
Wow...that's really really good. I honestly love it. great job! |
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WinterWren Senior Member
since 2002-12-01
Posts 1044...Coming to |
I really really love this! Especially the lines, "she’s so sick of trying for you. She’s been trying for so long." Again, excellent job, this is going in my library. Thanks for sharing. If I could fall asleep tonight |
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tearsoflove13762 Member
since 2004-09-05
Posts 488Texas.. and yes i have an accent |
"She sings the sad tunes aloud and strums the dead cords of her song, she’s so sick of trying for you. She’s been trying for so long. She’s so much better of a person Than you’ll ever know. By the time you see this sorry fact, She'll have finally let go." LOVE IT |
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