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tearsoflove13762
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0 posted 2005-07-03 01:00 AM



If I am so over you,
then why do I need to hear your voice,
before I go to sleep at night?

If I am so over you,
then why do I need to feel your arms,
holding me so tight?

If I was over you,
I wouldn't think of you,
every minute of every day.

If I was over you,
I wouldn't be so alone,
with you so many miles away.

If I am so over you,
then why do I need you to come back?

love will make you beautiful

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with you
1 posted 2005-07-03 03:00 AM


ahhha sure do understand this
well done...

tearsoflove13762
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Texas.. and yes i have an accent
2 posted 2005-07-04 09:02 PM


thanks SEA
CrAzI_bAbI_cHiKa
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3 posted 2005-07-05 10:44 PM


Oh my God, don't change a word in this. I love it. This is going into my library. haha, Short n Sweet. I love this!!

_ker

I cant believe how long i waited
for the boy to turn into my man...

Now if i could figure out, if it was worth the wait.

tearsoflove13762
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Texas.. and yes i have an accent
4 posted 2005-07-05 11:04 PM


ha ha thanks~!

love will make you beautiful

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