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Many Miles |
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lilibeelee Member
since 2001-07-12
Posts 143 |
Miles seperate us But love leaves me strong Miles may come between But I know where we belong It's hard for me to let go Then see you once again It tears at my heart It makes me want to scream I have found this man It seems like a dream I hold on to you As you say these goodbyes I hold even tighter Then you look into my eyes Frustration fills me As I want to be where you are It's not fair I see you again Then I see you leave so quickly It pulls at my heart Put me in your suitcase Take me where you are I want to be with you Instead were so far It's hard to say goodbye So all I say is see ya soon So theres miles between us Yet that wont berid of my love Sooner I hope not later I'll be in your arms But sooner seems like later As the clock ticks on I know I'll be with you soon I just know I'll be with you The feelings undeniable The feeling feels so true So as I sit and wait for it to happen My love grows stronger I sit and ponder the day The day I see you again |
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frolicking dolphin Member
since 2003-02-23
Posts 268my own special world |
I like this, I can really relate to it, it's awful when someone you love moves away so you can no longer see them. Nice write ~*~Karen~*~ |
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kissa~rachelle Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988nowhere special |
That was a really good poem, I cant really relate to it, but i have a friend that really can, and i have to watch her suffer while he is gone, so i guess in a way i can relate to it. i hope to hear more. It was a beautiful write by the way. ~kissa~ |
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