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Teen Poetry #7

Defiant Will

Petey
Junior Member

since 2002-12-16

Posts 27
Idaho, USA

0 posted 2003-11-06 07:23 PM

Defiant Will

Too many sober moments remembered,
To deny the irrefutable.
Damaging the will to forget,
And avoid that which is dangerous and beautiful.

Past journeys in soul,
To express supressed sentiment.
Given up feelings untold,
Ending in my spirit and heart's detriment.

Sweep before Diety's nobility and power,
My obscene Defiance.
My adoration and desire
Will not die by divinity like a lamb amongst the lions.

© 2003 Matthew Peterson

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2003-11-06 08:37 PM

I loved this

fantastic writing. Hey, what part of Idaho are you at??

Petey
Junior Member

since 2002-12-16

Posts 27
Idaho, USA

2 posted 2003-11-06 08:39 PM

Thanks. I live near Rexburg.

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
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3 posted 2003-11-06 08:40 PM

aha well, I have no idea where that is lol I live by Boise

dertah
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since 2003-06-18

Posts 584

4 posted 2003-11-06 09:15 PM

lingering thoughts of...whatever. it could all be so simple, but it wasnt intended that way.

Lexy
Senior Member

since 2003-01-28

Posts 1038
California

5 posted 2003-11-07 06:29 PM

Wow petey, I'm impressed. The last stanza was well..moving. I was wondering though...is there a certain reason why Definance and Diety are capatalized? I was thinking it may have some significance? I think you have real talent, I don't really stumble upon too many people my age with this much insight. Well done.

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