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"Pass the T.P."
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"Pass the T.P." |
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chasing rain Senior Member
since 2001-05-15
Posts 737Canada |
I sincerely apologize...I had to get this out of my "system". --Leah -- PASS THE T.P. An Insomniac's Poem I came upon a toilet trail a trail I never knew I walked upon a sticky road a sticky road of poo WHAT SORT OF STAIN COULD BE THIS FAR SO FAR FROM ITS OWN HOME? A bum beside the road piped up and said "LEAVE ME ALONE!" I stepped aside, apologized For being so very crude But once I stepped, I soon regret To say the bum had pooed. WHAT THE HELL? I cried in horror At the mess and stink he made "Metamucil works, and exlax too And it's worth the money I paid." I quickly held my nose and left That awful smelly trail And let me say, without a doubt This is one god-awful tale. -- |
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I_dont_know_me Junior Member
since 2003-12-08
Posts 48UK, Cymru |
hah! i love it, great job  |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
hahaha...ooooooooooohh!  If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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lexus New Member
since 2005-06-21
Posts 5 |
Hi I'm Lexus, I'm a new member here.I like this poem.it's different,i've never really read anything like this.It's pretty good.e-mail me back if u want. P.S. maybe u can read sum of my stuff when i post it lexus |
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fearing-laughter Senior Member
since 2001-04-24
Posts 605land of cheese (Wisconsin) |
*shakes head sadly... haha just kidding. it made me laugh bergundy At least we're still friends! At least we're still alive!--Alkaline Trio |
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Match Member
since 2002-07-01
Posts 286Canada Edmonton |
It was funny. Liked It very much I did. Im sorry i've failed you all. |
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aaron woodside Member
since 2001-09-26
Posts 256 |
Leah. I doubt this will bump it, but come back and post more! This was funny.  Latersand I'm still stealing your Constructive Critiques message. I love it. Aaron Woodside |
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XxnoraxX Member
since 2006-01-24
Posts 122<3 MA,,,USA <3 |
lol hahaha. this is rly funny. it reminds me of those poems- the alice in wonderland ones. lol good job i was laughing sooo hard. XxnoraxX |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
It is GREAT to see your humor about! Thank you making me laugh out loud! I miss you and hope you are doing well. Keep writing... Loving the Read, Jennifer ((behind this fuzzy haze I can see that we are coffee and milk mixed, perfect, but not for everyone.)) |
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latteaddict213
since 2006-02-17
Posts 523Colorado |
lol! that was funny. adind some life to the teen section. Jessica |
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aliway Member
since 2006-03-05
Posts 185With in your eyes |
Great poem LoL, it was so funny and fun Love to read more *leah |
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chasing rain Senior Member
since 2001-05-15
Posts 737Canada |
Haha, wow. I must've been on crack when I wrote this. Hi everyone! Fading Away- I must be going insane, but I thought your name was Marie... Aaron, you should stop it with the "drop-in-for-2-seconds-and-then-drop-out-and-disappear-for-a-million-years" act. It's getting old! :P Speaking of old...I am not longer a teen.  So don't expect to see much of this old geezer anytime soon. Hah!--Leah |
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aaron woodside Member
since 2001-09-26
Posts 256 |
Lol, yeah I know, but is'nt it so much fun to find these new messages posted on old old threads. And I could have sworn her name was Marie too... |
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~XxMz.NerdyRockstarxX~ Junior Member
since 2011-01-14
Posts 15Alabama, United States |
LOL i love that ~XxExpect Nothing N You'll Never Get HurtxX~ |
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