Teen Poetry #7 |
how much do i have on? |
youcan'tseeme Member
since 2004-01-30
Posts 88 |
The mirror relects satisfaction but the subject questions its truth. A twisted hemp necklace lounges over the collarbone and the exotic pink bead stands boldly in the center. The light glints off the newly peirced ears; tiny gold studs add 3mm of flare to an empty area on either side. Hair was pulled back earlier, in a habitious manner, without much thought. After a few hours of life, the loose strands begin to party, and the raggle taggle look that she loves oh so much has taken form. It's the perfect time between two showers: a natural smooth blonde shine, but not an oil drop past silk. The ribbed tank top fits nicely around the tanned shoulders and shaped bra, and the slacks ride low on those hips. So she wonders: if she were robbed of everything that wasn't her's to begin with, what would she have left? If she were bare, would she still see the beauty? |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I would have to hope that she would Welcome to Pip! Please check your email for a special greeting! |
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tearsoflove13762 Member
since 2004-09-05
Posts 488Texas.. and yes i have an accent |
welcome to pip! GREAT write... thanks for your comments love will make you beautiful |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
Welcome to Passions Bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Welcome to Passions. I really liked your write. I like how your mind works. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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WinterWren Senior Member
since 2002-12-01
Posts 1044...Coming to |
Excellent first post! Welcome to pip If I could fall asleep tonight |
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HopelessRomanticGuy Member
since 2001-08-17
Posts 495LI, New York |
This show's some serious thought here. I loved the thought's this conveys. Would any of us see ourselves as beautiful if we we're stripped of our facade and our true selves laid bare? I'd like to think so, but I really don't know. Truly excellent first post! -Rich "I am a part of the world that I hate/I wish the end would come faster, my world's a distaster," - Crossfade "Starless" |
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Michelle_loves_Mike
since 2003-12-20
Posts 1189Pennsylvania |
So she wonders: if she were robbed of everything that wasn't her's to begin with, what would she have left? If she were bare, would she still see the beauty? This part his home,,,how many people could face the world without persona on? Good stuff. welcome to PIP talk If home is where the heart is,,,,,I guess the corner bar is where the mind wanders off to |
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~*BayBee*~ Member
since 2003-04-09
Posts 65In The Clouds... |
I know exactly how that feels and i personally wouldnt see my beauty if that happened. Great work! *Holly* |
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