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I'm not that kind of girl, but your that kind of guy
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I'm not that kind of girl, but your that kind of guy |
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tearsoflove13762 Member
since 2004-09-05
Posts 488Texas.. and yes i have an accent 
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I'm not that kind of girl. I will not lead you on then drop you like a bomb. Your that kind of guy. Seduce me then knock me off my feet. How could you do this to me? You were so worried about me hurting you. But thats been turned up side down. Cause your that kind of guy. I'm not playin these old school games. Hangin out with my girls. So we got in a little late and you, you started freakin out. thats not fair. love will make you beautiful |
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kissa~rachelle Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988nowhere special |
hmm...it just doesnt flow right...and it feels like its not finished....but thats just me. <3 karissa I ask why, but in my mind, |
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kissa~rachelle Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988nowhere special |
Its not bad though...just revise it a little..  <3 karissa I ask why, but in my mind, |
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SwT DeViL Junior Member
since 2005-06-21
Posts 26London |
hey....this is good bit im sure that you could improve by a lot....cause it is kind of unfinished but maybe thats the way you wanted it take care ***...$wT DeViL...*** |
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tearsoflove13762 Member
since 2004-09-05
Posts 488Texas.. and yes i have an accent |
thanks for the replies yeah you both are right its not unfinished yet but i went on vacation and didnt have time so i just posted it but i will re-write sometime in the next few weeks |
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