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CrAzI_bAbI_cHiKa
Member

since 2003-07-16

Posts 248

0 posted 2005-05-03 08:36 PM

sometimes life doesn't go how you expect it.
In your eyes i saw my future.
alone, with you forever.
And although i was terrified
I felt that this might be more than
just a kiss

I was never supposed to fall in love with you
It was all going to be for fun
but theres nothing i can do now
because i am
and forever will be yours
Because it wasn't
just a kiss

A tone in your voice
told me I would be ok.
and I fell into you, hoping for
an endless love
A Hope that might be futile
but i continued to hope.
Because you proved to me
that you weren't
just a kiss.

By the way, your hands are shaking...

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2005-05-03 09:53 PM

ahhhhha yyeah...
remember this feeling...
this rocks

fearing-laughter
Senior Member

since 2001-04-24

Posts 605
land of cheese (Wisconsin)

2 posted 2005-05-04 12:59 PM

'just a kiss' pretty simple, but still good. i don't know what my exact thoughts are on this cuz i'm pretty tired, but i really did like it...especially the end again like the last one of your's i read. good job

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At least we're still friends! At least we're still alive!--Alkaline Trio

Poems of Autumn
Junior Member

since 2005-04-18

Posts 11
highschool

3 posted 2005-05-09 11:47 AM

Oh man! I wish that I had someone who felt as compassionate about me as your poem portrayed! So far I haven't been very lucky in the love department.

I loved the poem. It gives hope to all the other people who don't have that special someone.

WranglrButts9
Member

since 2004-10-24

Posts 108
Iowa, US

4 posted 2005-05-09 06:09 PM

I understand where you're coming from. Although in my experiences... it did turn out as more than just a kiss.. then bam it was all over, and I was again invisible.. Guess its prbly partly my fault too, but theres nothing I can do to change it now. Its a good poem, but kind of bland towards the end.. I still love it though! lol

Bailey

Good judgment comes from experience,
and a lotta that comes from bad judgment.

tearsoflove13762
Member

since 2004-09-05

Posts 488
Texas.. and yes i have an accent

5 posted 2005-05-11 01:45 AM

i loooove it... makes me cry... in a good way lol thanks for sharing im adding it to my library

love will make you beautiful

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