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WranglrButts9
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0 posted 2005-04-23 08:45 PM



Its Love

I sit at my desk,
While staring at your picture
With tears streaming down my face

For what reason,
I do not know
But why should I?

Its love

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This is short, compared to my usual. But I like it... Im dealin w. some hard times right now- both w. guys and parents. Its been almost a year since I saw the guy I wrote this about, and next weekend Im going to see him again. Ive told myself over & over that it was just a fling, and I almost got myself to get his name out of my mind. But the last month its been there non stop, and last night while talking to a friend, it hit me hard that he might be feelin the same way, or the complete opposite. But I'll never know, unless I ask. So now Im looking forward to next weekend... more than ever before!

Bailey

Good judgment comes from experience,
and a lotta that comes from bad judgment.

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1 posted 2005-04-30 12:46 PM


let us know how it went!!!
I hope you have a wonderful time and the questions in your heart get answered

CrAzI_bAbI_cHiKa
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2 posted 2005-05-02 10:17 PM


well, i know im definitely a little late on this one, but hey! i still want to know how it went. as far as the poem goes, very short, simple and perfect. love it!


_keryn

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3 posted 2005-05-03 12:01 PM


Yeah, it didn't go... it sucked as a matter of fact. I was led on one night, then totally shot down when I saw him w. his girlfriend... oh well, Im done & over it.

Bailey

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4 posted 2005-05-03 12:17 PM


I'm so sorry...I'm glad you know now, even though it hurts. *hugs*
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5 posted 2005-05-08 08:26 PM


Omg sweetie, im sorry...He's not worth it anyways. if he was, he'd be with ya! Sorry to all the guys who will read this, and please dont like EAT me for saying this, but i swear one of these days, all you buttholes*lol* will grow up and realize that you bite. really, you will. in any case, dont go looking for love, its gonna happen. for now, just flirt, have fun, and kick some more serious butt with your poetry.

_keryn

I cant believe how long i waited
for the boy to turn into my man...

Now if i could figure out, if it was worth the wait.

WranglrButts9
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6 posted 2005-05-09 05:50 PM


Thanks for the advice! You do the same... btw the things youve been writing lately have kicked major butt! lol

Bailey
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7 posted 2005-05-10 07:11 PM


Sometimes the hardest thing is not knowing. Its always better to find out before it goes to long.  Sorry for your pain,
keep writing, it will help.

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8 posted 2005-05-13 08:05 PM


i liked the simple sentiment behind this, and i agree...boys suck (most of them). lol i feel so pouty being 18 and saying that, but oh well.  

berg

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