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'i told you so'
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'i told you so' |
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aussie teen Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 396Australia |
hey there everyone im back... had some serious writers block and needed to work thru some stuff before the block was cleared... this isnt my best work.. let me know wat you think anyway Ruth 'i told you so' you've come back again im just wondering how long is it going to be this time my heart is still bleeding for you my mind still lingers in my memories of us my body still remembers your touch wishing, hoping, dreaming for it once again dont make me cry over you once more dont make me scream because i heard 'i told you so' over again live life as if your going to die tomorow....... but love as if your going to live forever...... |
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PoeTik JusTice Member
since 2003-01-05
Posts 186California, USA |
Well, I can definitely feel your pain in this poem! Good job.  XoXo Love Alwayz XoXo |
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Poems of Autumn Junior Member
since 2005-04-18
Posts 11highschool |
Interesting. I liked the feeling you put in the poem. It seemed like you made me feel exactly what you were feeling. I try to do that every time I write, but to me it just doesn't come out. But maybe since I'm new here, I can get some ideas from all the great poets here. |
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Jezzika Member
since 2005-01-05
Posts 154work |
"dont make me cry over you once more dont make me scream because i heard 'i told you so' over again" Wow, there was so much emotion in this. I really liked it. Jezzika |
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aussie teen Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 396Australia |
thanks everyone for replying this isnt my best work but you have to start somewhere after writers block... thanks again your all legends Ruth live life as if your going to die tomorow....... but love as if your going to live forever...... |
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