Teen Poetry #7 |
its lighter then you think. |
Lexy Senior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038California |
I was the youth and you were the age yet I was the wisdom somehow as we met between these middle days. a hand on my waist, a grin on my face. we were not meant to be this way. Do you feel how it's lighter then we think. density has no place here. freckled face, surpress the gas emmiting from your skin. Wear your childhood baseball cap don't let it catch in the wind. The scent... It's making me cough. supress it. package it in a box. decorate the outside. do what you like, besides the usual. the practical is a famished mind and pink, pink rubber gun. start the water fight. prepare to enter through the glowing doorway. prepare yourself. [This message has been edited by Lexy (03-20-2005 05:13 PM).] |
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I_dont_know_me Junior Member
since 2003-12-08
Posts 48UK, Cymru |
so many memories... |
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electricxheart Member
since 2004-09-05
Posts 184far away from home. |
Yes, it does remind me of my childhood days. Such an overpowering feeling. Thank you for this. I really liked it. |
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Lexy Senior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038California |
You know what's strange. as I wrote this. I wasn't even sure what it was about. and now I know. Its about come of age in this world, its about never losing the child in you. |
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fearing-laughter Senior Member
since 2001-04-24
Posts 605land of cheese (Wisconsin) |
hmm...it reminds me of how i am a year younger then my cousin but she's the one who keeps f'ing up, not me, so i found something reading this. you are one of my favorite poets here, keep writing...please. bergundy At least we're still friends! At least we're still alive!--Alkaline Trio |
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