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moonguardian2004
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0 posted 2005-03-07 10:08 AM



My own little catipillar
Was defenitely the best
She turned into a butterfly
Which allowed me to feel love like all the rest

The love had grown slowly
It was like my heart was under arrest
But then came my butterflies in my stomache
Practically jumping out of my chest

It was happy for many months
I was finally in love again
We already had a strong friendship
That was able to strengthen

It was going so great
We both had twinkles in our eyes
All of a sudden he changed
It was hard to even realize

He started to be secluded
Wouldn't share his feelings with me
I found out he was having second thoughts
Of if he could be with me

He had made mistakes before
That he promised he would quite
He was doing great
But his friends finally got to it

I still don't understand what happened
I never got a straight reply
He won't stay in the same room as me
I just don't understand why

I am at college
He is graduating from high school
The really funny part
He is coming to my school

I think he is mad at himself
Our friends that are with him agree
I wish he would just grow up
I wish he would come and talk to me

A friendship
Is nothing to abort
But I have tried to accept
That the ball is in his court

~*To be a star, you must shine your own light, follow your own path and don't worry about the darkness for that is when stars shine oh so bright !~

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1 posted 2005-03-08 06:38 AM


"Change" would be a simply enough title or perhaps "Metamorphisis" though quite unoriginal would fit. Anyway great writing

Andrew

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