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yankees01rugby Junior Member
since 2003-08-13
Posts 48USA |
I sit here alone thinking of you. How we could be together But I won’t say what I deem The fear of losing you is too deep. This feeling I’ve never had before It feels as though I’m on cloud nine. There’s something about you But I can’t put my finger on it Something pulling me towards you Closer every time. Taking the long way around just to be with you Just to have you there, even if we don’t talk. I look into your baby blue eyes And wonder what you’re thinking, If you have the same feeling. Will you let me look inside and see the real you? Will you hold me in your arms when I need you? Will you take the weight of the world off my shoulders? Will you steal the stars from the sky and put them in the palm of my hand? "What your mind believes, your body will achieve. Its time to start believing." |
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tearsoflove13762 Member
since 2004-09-05
Posts 488Texas.. and yes i have an accent |
hmmm... i like the name Closer Every Time -Laura |
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Android 17
since 2001-07-21
Posts 664Winnipeg |
I think "Closer Every Time" does it for me too! |
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Jezzika Member
since 2005-01-05
Posts 154work |
I think "closer every time" is perfect. I really liked this poem. It was great.  Jezz you know he really wants me |
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