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Sweetpoet16m4u04
Member

since 2002-11-10

Posts 153
Ma, U.S.A

0 posted 2005-02-16 11:33 PM

Two lovers at the end of an aisle in a little white church
Souls connecting in harmony like a songbird sings sitting upon a perch
The preacher going through the wedding sermon
As they listen knowing inside their hearts are turning

They spend glorious days with each other
Talking about anything from the day the first met to how nice the weather.
Harmony brought this couple together one fine day
They make a promise they will forever remain hand in hand until one passes away

The next day the world came to an end for one of them
She passed away and that was something he didn’t want to comprehend
Days turned into months and the months faded into years
As he couldn’t seem to stop the flowing of his tears.

Until one day he passed by the old schoolhouse
He noticed a young woman that looked as if she could be a twin of his ex spouse.
They began talking and getting to know each other
And at the end of night he thanked God for bringing him this much needed answer.

[This message has been edited by Sweetpoet16m4u04 (02-18-2005 01:53 PM).]

Lexy
Senior Member

since 2003-01-28

Posts 1038
California

1 posted 2005-02-17 05:51 PM

interesting
very creative and touching

tearsoflove13762
Member

since 2004-09-05

Posts 488
Texas.. and yes i have an accent

2 posted 2005-02-18 12:00 PM

this is so different than ur usual posts i enjoyed it very much thanks for sharing!

-hold on to the one you love

*Alli4000*

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since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

3 posted 2005-02-19 10:27 PM

Yeah, this is really different than what you would normally write. When I got to the 3rd stanza I was like about to cry like this poem was really really powerful. Just amazing write...gonna put it in my library. Luv ya.

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Jezzika
Member

since 2005-01-05

Posts 154
work

4 posted 2005-02-22 12:28 PM

I need some tissues. This was really good. I loved the end

"Until one day he passed by the old schoolhouse
He noticed a young woman that looked as if she could be a twin of his ex spouse.
They began talking and getting to know each other
And at the end of night he thanked God for bringing him this much needed answer."

This is going in my library!!!

Jezzika

you know he really wants me

moonguardian2004
Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 64
MA, USA

5 posted 2005-03-11 12:41 PM

Very interesting. I agree that it's not something that you would usually write...it's still really good though!!

Mere

~*To be a star, you must shine your own light, follow your own path and don't worry about the darkness for that is when stars shine oh so bright !~

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