Teen Poetry #7 |
Wounded |
Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
Wishing that I could describe, How badly this betrayal, Has damaged me- But knowing deep down, No words would be evil enough. How could you? Why? Why do this to me? Anger so intense, It’s got every nerve, Walkin’ that thin wire. Every muscle shivering, Every knuckle bruised and bloody. WHY?! WHY WOULD YOU DO THIS?! THERE IS NO MORE TRUST. THERE IS ONLY BETRAYAL. You took that final step, To the edge of our friendship, And made the plunge, That would ruin everything. Good job. FIND THE ONE THING- THAT CRIPPLES ME- COMPLETELY. "Cuz I'm broken, when I'm lonesome, and I don't feel right when you're gone away..."~ Seether |
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~DreamChild~ Senior Member
since 2001-04-23
Posts 544in your dreams |
Awesome expression which is your trademark so far. ~ the stuff dreams are made of ~ |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
Thank you. "Cuz I'm broken, when I'm lonesome, and I don't feel right when you're gone away..."~ Seether |
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Savage Quiescence Member
since 2002-07-29
Posts 326Wandering |
Not bad, powerful emotion. |
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