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Teen Poetry #7

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Spine Grinder
Senior Member

since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

0 posted 2005-02-07 08:55 PM

Wishing that I could describe,
How badly this betrayal,
Has damaged me-
But knowing deep down,
No words would be evil enough.

How could you?
Why? Why do this to me?

Anger so intense,
It’s got every nerve,
Walkin’ that thin wire.
Every muscle shivering,
Every knuckle bruised and bloody.

WHY?! WHY WOULD YOU DO THIS?!
THERE IS NO MORE TRUST.
THERE IS ONLY BETRAYAL.

You took that final step,
To the edge of our friendship,
And made the plunge,
That would ruin everything.
Good job.

FIND THE ONE THING-
THAT CRIPPLES ME-
COMPLETELY.

"Cuz I'm broken, when I'm lonesome, and I don't feel right when you're gone away..."~ Seether

"I shut my eyes and hold my cries to myself"~ Taproot

~DreamChild~
Senior Member

since 2001-04-23

Posts 544
in your dreams

1 posted 2005-02-07 09:06 PM

Awesome expression which is your trademark so far.

~ the stuff dreams are made of ~

Spine Grinder
Senior Member

since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

2 posted 2005-02-10 06:26 AM

Thank you.

"Cuz I'm broken, when I'm lonesome, and I don't feel right when you're gone away..."~ Seether

"I shut my eyes and hold my cries to myself"~ Taproot

Savage Quiescence
Member

since 2002-07-29

Posts 326
Wandering

3 posted 2005-02-11 09:01 PM

Not bad, powerful emotion.

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