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tearsoflove13762
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since 2004-09-05
Posts 488
Texas.. and yes i have an accent

0 posted 2005-01-19 09:46 PM



ok well i wrote this when i was real upset and i really dont know what it is but... its  how i feel


You, were my first love,
then we broke up and our relationship came to a hard stop.

We met again a few months later.
Hearing you speak passionatly about the Lord made me realize.
It made me realize what about you that has kept me holding on to you and I fell head over heals for you yet again.

But you did not share the same love;
you asked me not to feel it either and I didn't...
or so I thought.

A year later I called you, just to catch up on old times. You were single, as was I.

Our new relationship was nothing like before.
We both had transformed.

Some of our views had changed...
Sexual actions,
our main activity;Although we assured each other that it was not the basis of our relationship.

I am afraid that is all it has become though we never completed "the act".

Just yesterday I turned you down; Sadly, not because I realized the right thing to do but I realized something else...

You were my first love,
no more,
no less.

© Copyright 2005 Laura Risner - All Rights Reserved
merlynh
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since 1999-09-26
Posts 411
deer park, wa
1 posted 2005-01-20 05:25 PM


This was very nice. I don't know why anyone else hasn't left a post. Thanks for sharing.
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