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Teen Poetry #7

Magnetic Romance

tearsoflove13762
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since 2004-09-05

Posts 488
Texas.. and yes i have an accent

0 posted 2005-01-11 01:10 AM

Chrimson, gold, and fushia stream across the sky.
Your magnetic arms try to assure me it will be alright.
Although my heart still pounds in fright.
Not scared of you,
but terrified from not knowing what to do
If i tell you how much I love you, will you still stay?
or will you just run away?
Soft skin pressing against my lips,
Do you mean it when you give me this sweet kiss?
I am dazzled, yet confused by all of this
Please tell me what we are and if it will remain.
Will this relationship stay the same?
Look at me and close your eyes,
think of all those simple nights.
Watching movies, going to church,
Do you realize how much that is worth?
It doesnt need to be complex,
I will not do what you may expect.

I have previously posted something similar to this but i revised and lengthened it- Laura

Savage Quiescence
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since 2002-07-29

Posts 326
Wandering

1 posted 2005-01-24 03:18 PM

This is a good portrayal of how frightening the beginning of a new relationship can be. You did well.

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