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Teen Poetry #7

Jealousy (revised)

tearsoflove13762
Member

since 2004-09-05

Posts 488
Texas.. and yes i have an accent

0 posted 2005-01-10 09:09 PM

i am not jealous of him being with you;

although you are my best friend.

i dont like him;

although i am jealous...

i can not stand seeing you together.

I can't run from it.

I would run out of breath.

the love,

the passion,

the heat,

the binding attraction.

all of which is missing from my life.

HopelessRomanticGuy
Member

since 2001-08-17

Posts 495
LI, New York

1 posted 2005-01-10 10:17 PM

And this will be me soon if things keep going in the direction they are. Well written and extremely expressive. not a style usually seen here. I'm sorry your in that position, knowing how much it sucks.

-Rich

"I am a part of the world that I hate/I wish the end would come faster, my world's a distaster," - Crossfade "Starless"

John B
Member

since 2002-07-02

Posts 68
Texas, USA

2 posted 2005-01-11 12:12 PM

I think that's terrible. Kick'em in the shins. *wipes a fake tear*

tearsoflove13762
Member

since 2004-09-05

Posts 488
Texas.. and yes i have an accent

3 posted 2005-01-11 12:34 PM

a fake tear?!? lmao jk thanks guys

Jezzika
Member

since 2005-01-05

Posts 154
work

4 posted 2005-01-19 12:31 PM

I loved this.... I liked the first one and this is even better

you know he really wants me

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