What if tomorrow never came?

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Sweetpoet16m4u04
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since 2002-11-10

Posts 153
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0 posted 2005-01-09 08:37 PM

What if tomorrow never came?
Would my heart be finally cured from all its pain?
I don’t believe so because if tomorrow never came,
I wouldn’t be able to be in a love that burns like an everlasting flame.

You see the day slowly fading into the night
Questions arise in my mind if it’s finally time to give up the fight
Tomorrow will soon be here
Will I or wont I be that’s always a question we fear

The hardest thing in life is taking it day by day
We all go through the motions, sometimes pushing the loved ones away
What doesn’t kill us will make us stronger isn’t that the truth
It’s what we grow up hearing simply making it the foundation of our youth

So what really would happen if tomorrow never came?
We can all agree that nothing would be the same.
I don’t want to be able to never see another tomorrow
Cause if I didn’t then all my friends and family would be in sorrow.

moonguardian2004
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since 2002-12-01

Posts 64
MA, USA

1 posted 2005-01-09 08:42 PM

Great write. It shows alot of emotion and it brings up a very good question. I guess I never thought about there never being another tomorrow. Made me think how I should treat everyone wonderful each and everyday. Love ya

~Mere~

~*To be a star, you must shine your own light, follow your own path and don't worry about the darkness for that is when stars shine oh so bright !~

tearsoflove13762
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since 2004-09-05

Posts 488
Texas.. and yes i have an accent

2 posted 2005-01-09 10:49 PM

i love you...smile a little!

Jezzika
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since 2005-01-05

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3 posted 2005-01-10 11:03 AM

"The hardest thing in life is taking it day by day
We all go through the motions, sometimes pushing the loved ones away
What doesn’t kill us will make us stronger isn’t that the truth
It’s what we grow up hearing simply making it the foundation of our youth"

This was my favorite part. This poem was great i loved it....

Jezzika

you know he really wants me

aussie teen
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since 2003-09-27

Posts 396
Australia

4 posted 2005-01-11 10:05 AM

beautiful poem.....
one thing... tomorow never really comes because its always going to be tomorow.... and the same as yesterday will always be yesterday.... yes tomorow will become today, but there will always be a tomorow..... hehehe just something to think about...

but yeah a very beautiful poem, as always... keep them coming.
Ruth

live life as if your going to die tomorow....... but love as if your going to live forever......

*Alli4000*

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since 2004-03-21

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5 posted 2005-01-11 08:47 PM

Wow Chris....just awesome write!

Wuv ya!

Happy 2005!

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