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Teen Poetry #7

So close, yet so far away

WindSong
Member

since 2002-12-23

Posts 313
Long Island, New York

0 posted 2005-01-06 03:26 PM

You are so close yet so far away
just like the stars in the night sky
I can't touch you, I can only see you
It's a tease, a hurtful game
Please come closer, I want to feel you.

"They say that truth will set you free, but then so will a lie. It all depends if you're trying to get to the promised land or just trying to get by."

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

1 posted 2005-01-06 05:04 PM

Kirah! Nice to see you back. I really love this poem alot!! It's short and simple, but gets the point across perfectly. And it helps that I can really relate.
Again, great to see you here.

But Im comforted
by the fact that I can hurt inside
all I want to
without anyone ever knowing
~WinterWren~

WindSong
Member

since 2002-12-23

Posts 313
Long Island, New York

2 posted 2005-01-06 11:00 PM

Why thank you! It's good to be back, let's just hope and pray I can keep producing...

AH! plenty this weekend.

PEACE!

"They say that truth will set you free, but then so will a lie. It all depends if you're trying to get to the promised land or just trying to get by."

HopelessRomanticGuy
Member

since 2001-08-17

Posts 495
LI, New York

3 posted 2005-01-06 11:32 PM

All I can say Kirah, is that I hope he appriciates just how much you love him. And I know well the feeling of being so close to someone, yet so far away. I'm there, in a different manner of speaking, right now. Even when I'm in the same room with her, I'm far away. Acting stoic when all I want to do is wrap my arms around her. Just can't seem to find any way to bridge the distance. And to think, one little poem made me come up with all this. BTW. Good luck in NJ! Have fun! (^.-)

"I am a part of the world that I hate/I wish the end would come faster, my world's a distaster," - Crossfade "Starless"

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