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Rewrties from 2003 #3

Kellie_Cantrell
Senior Member

since 2002-05-22

Posts 1667
New York

0 posted 2004-12-29 11:19 PM

Then or Now 4-26-2003
From now, to then.
A lost forgotton tomorrow.
A part of the future that was never seen in the past.
Slices of continious rambling.
A crisis of thought.
A cramp of style.
Today a yesterday of tomorow of now.
Lost to nothing to tomorrow.

tapper798
Member

since 2003-07-20

Posts 353
My own world

1 posted 2004-12-31 08:49 PM

hmm wow, well maybe it's just me right now but this peom confused the heck outta me...but it made me think, and that's why I liked it. Not really sure what to say about this cause I liked that it made me think but I'm still not sure I understand what you're trying to say lol Good write anyhow, despite my ignorance! hehe Happy New year!

AIM-blueyed angel940
One day u'll ask which is more important,u or my life. I'll answer my life and u'll walk away never knowing u are my life.

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