Teen Poetry #7 |
I played the fool |
tapper798 Member
since 2003-07-20
Posts 353My own world |
You played me good, I bet it was so easy, I must admit, I played the fool You held my heart up by the strings, a mere puppet All the things you said...they were bull. You told me what I wanted to hear, letting me fall into your trap of lies, letting me believe you really did care, You're just like all the other guys. Make up your mind, it's never sure, tell me what exactly do you want? Is it me you want or is it her? back and forth, how your mind taunts. How could I even trust you again, after how much you hurt me? I would have been better off had I just asked you to leave. You could have at least told me, let me save my pride. Instead you were a coward, hid it and then lied. You led me to believe that she meant nothing to you. All this time you knew it a lie, you knew it wasn't true. You did it cause you were scared, well how the hell do you think I feel now? I want to just forget you exist, But I can't seem to figure out now. I wish I could make you hurt like this, but I won't give you that pleasure, cause no matter what you put me through, my love for you you couldn't measure. You can laugh, you can cry, you can choose to ignore it, but you lied to me, killed me inside, you lost the 1 person you "cared" about, now you have to live with it. -Erin Ok not my best I know and I'm sure alot of you won't understand this cause it's a certain situation but yeah let me know what you think anyways. AIM-blueyed angel940 One day u'll ask which is more important,u or my life. I'll answer my life and u'll walk away never knowing u are my life. |
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Savage Quiescence Member
since 2002-07-29
Posts 326Wandering |
You tell him, girl! Unfortunately, I can relate. Been there, done that, his loss. Good write, thanks for sharing. We the unwilling,led by the unknowing, are doing the impossible, for the ungrateful. We have done so much, for so long, with so little, we are now qua |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
OMG ERIN! I don't think that you have EVER written a poem that I have not liked or been able to relate to. Your such a talented poet. Your poems blow me away. ~Alli~ Happy Holidays! |
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HopelessRomanticGuy Member
since 2001-08-17
Posts 495LI, New York |
Can't say as I agree. This is very good, and I can relate, as well. So no, I can't agree at all. (^.^) Sorry to hear it didn't work out. Glad to see such wonderful work from you, even as a result of less than happy events, because let's face it, the best poetry comes out of either love, misery, or sorrow. Sorry he let you down, may luck treat you better in times ahead! -Rich "and I searched your eyes for an answer |
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