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Kellie_Cantrell
Senior Member

since 2002-05-22

Posts 1667
New York

0 posted 2004-12-03 06:52 PM

Speechless,

    You lied,

        I cried,

          Depthless.

Your Wife.

     My Life,

        Your daughter,

             what a father.

Deception

     Apprehension

          Destruction

                 Emotion

Nothing to hide

       I'd rather have died,

                 you think your on love,

                          I took flight like a dove.

«*:·. God Bless
         .·:* Love and
         *:·.  Happiness,
            *«        Kellie Cantrell

~DreamChild~
Senior Member

since 2001-04-23

Posts 544
in your dreams

1 posted 2004-12-03 11:53 PM

cool. you write such great poetry .

*Alli4000*

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since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

2 posted 2004-12-05 06:20 PM

Wow Kellie...such emotion and it's sad

Just wondering, if this is a true write? Hang in there.

~Alli~

Happy Holidays!

Kellie_Cantrell
Senior Member

since 2002-05-22

Posts 1667
New York

3 posted 2004-12-05 09:20 PM

Thanks Dream!

Alli: This isn't a "true" write. It is was supposed to make a point to someone but I doubt it did.

~DreamChild~
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since 2001-04-23

Posts 544
in your dreams

4 posted 2004-12-05 10:38 PM

oh yes it did. see my post titled "vanity".
and in the discussion forum titled "tomorrow". ( if you will please.)
Alli4000 will help to elaborate on the subject.

i do greatly admire your poetry.
even this painful piece.

HopelessRomanticGuy
Member

since 2001-08-17

Posts 495
LI, New York

5 posted 2004-12-05 11:15 PM

This seems like a private conversation, so I feel like i'm intruding. (If I am, I'm really sorry!

I just had to say that, whatever the reason for writing, your poetry is always beautiful!

-Rich

"I'm burning in the heavens,
and I'm drowning in a hell.
And my soul is in a coma
and none of my friends can tell,"
~Take Me~ Papa Roach

*Alli4000*

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since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

6 posted 2004-12-06 06:13 PM

I was afraid that it might have been what I thought it might be about. In the tomorrow post, I honestly didn't mean to start something. Sorry.

I'm really sorry to hear Kellie that you wont be posting in teen anymore. If you ever do tho, I'll be here to read it.

~Alli~

Oh, dreamchild...I don't know what u except me to elaborate on, but I really don't want to be part of this whole thing.

Happy Holidays!

[This message has been edited by *Alli4000* (12-06-2004 08:06 PM).]

Kellie_Cantrell
Senior Member

since 2002-05-22

Posts 1667
New York

7 posted 2004-12-06 06:33 PM

Its okay hopeless..

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