Teen Poetry #7 |
This is short and simple just like our love affair.. |
Sweetest Sorrow X Member
since 2004-01-19
Posts 146From a cradle to a casket |
I laid on the concrete. Mind blurry. But I was still only thinking of you. No matter what. She would rather be dead than fat, |
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electricxheart Member
since 2004-09-05
Posts 184far away from home. |
aw, i love it! so short but so pretty. -kelly remember to breathe after you exhale. |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
OMG! LOVE THIS! First short poem i've seen you written (i think ) and I liked! ~Alli~ *:.AIM = Alli4000.:* My Journal |
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~DreamChild~ Senior Member
since 2001-04-23
Posts 544in your dreams |
hey this was really awesome! i love shorts, and this one was dynamite in small packaging. "from the cradle to the casket" is that original? very catchy. |
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red_angel*16 Member
since 2004-09-04
Posts 71 |
cute poem, keep posting |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Great writing SSX, I really enjoyed the read |
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