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~DreamChild~
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since 2001-04-23
Posts 544
in your dreams

0 posted 2004-11-16 09:49 PM


TO ALL MY FRIENDS AT PASSIONS
I GIVE MY HUMBLE THANKS.
IN THE COMPANY OF MY PEERS
YOU ARE FIRST AMONG THE RANKS.

YOU WELCOME ME WITH OPEN ARMS
INTO THIS SPECIAL PLACE.
IN MY MEEK AND GRATEFUL HEART
I TREASURE YOUR EMBRACE.

SUCH FORTUNE SHINES UPON ME,
THAT I YOUR LIKES SHOULD FIND,
WHO LISTEN WITHOUT PREJUDICED
TO THE VOICE OF SOUL AND MIND.

MAY GOD HEAR EACH OF YOUR FAINTEST CRIES
AND ANSWER YOUR EVERY PLEA
FOR TURNING NOT AWAY THE LEAST,
YES, THE LEAST OF ALL, IS ME.

I WISH YOU MANY BLESSINGS
AND LIFT YOU UP IN PRAYER.
THANK YOU FOR YOUR KINDNESS,
THANK YOU FOR YOUR CARE.

           ~Express Yourself~
          

© Copyright 2004 derrick gillum - All Rights Reserved
young_blood
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since 2003-09-19
Posts 1115
Indianapolis, IN
1 posted 2004-11-16 10:07 PM


thank you. we all are glad you are here.
Connel
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since 2002-11-04
Posts 736
Florida, USA
2 posted 2004-11-16 10:47 PM


Quite nicely done. Passions is much like a home to much of us here, all though I have been long from home this year.

Nice poem, enjoyed it much.

"The truth is there, but you must want it, and must want it bad enough to be able to grasp it." - Me

HopelessRomanticGuy
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since 2001-08-17
Posts 495
LI, New York
3 posted 2004-11-17 12:40 PM


Gotta say my visits here are as sporadic as the direction of the wind, but I agree, it is a home to a great deal of us.  It's nice to have a place like this to come to; where all can be accepted.  And you are in no way "least." You are as much a part of all this as any.  "A family of friends," as our home has been called.  We're glad to have you!

[center]"I'm burning in the heavens,
and I'm drowning in a hell.
And my soul is in a coma
and none of my friends can tell,"
[i]~Take Me~ Papa Roca

*Alli4000*
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4 posted 2004-11-17 07:12 PM


Passions is like my second home....

~Alli~

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WranglrButts9
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since 2004-10-24
Posts 108
Iowa, US
5 posted 2004-11-17 07:16 PM


I know I haven't been here long, but you always have things to say about my writings. This is awesome! Everyone deserves a little appreciation, and sadly its running out in this world.

Bailey

Good judgment comes from experience,
and a lotta that comes from bad judgment.

Kellie_Cantrell
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since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667
New York
6 posted 2004-11-18 12:58 PM


Passions is an amazing place.. and it is such a cozy home. Thank You DreamChild, but passions isn't passions without you too.

Smile

punkrockerrobin
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Sparks, NV
7 posted 2004-11-18 10:23 PM


i feel loved yay!

hi my name is robin and i am addicted to poetry and matt!
"and we'll all float on ok....." - modest mouse
aim - reklesabandnrckr

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