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~DreamChild~ Senior Member
since 2001-04-23
Posts 544in your dreams 
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fresh grass misty morning cold dew on naked toes behind the sunbeams the majestic rainbow leprechauns dance in pots of gold children echo across creation the lands listen in silent awe laugh now sweet child the times are happy one day one life everything tends to change ~Express Yourself~ |
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punkrockerrobin 
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
"one day one life everything tends to change" i loved that last part  great write.robin hi my name is robin and i am addicted to poetry and matt! |
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~DreamChild~ Senior Member
since 2001-04-23
Posts 544in your dreams |
thx! |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
I liked the ending too. Nice job! Now when are we gonna take that vote...? lol.  !!~Alli~ *:.AIM = Alli4000.:* My Journal |
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Kellie_Cantrell Senior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667New York |
hmm, interesting. I liked this. |
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Lexy Senior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038California |
leprechauns dance in pots of gold HAHA...ha. probably wasn't supposed to strike me funny but it did. I just so got an image of that. nice. |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
quote: i'd walk outside barefooted, but it's a little bit cold outside now short statements that paint big pictures great read |
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