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Kellie_Cantrell
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0 posted 2004-11-14 11:04 PM


At ease. Rejected and alone.
Tearful at the beginning and the end.
The mark,
marking each translucent moment, from here to die.
Lost in this world, not brave, not scared,
scarred.

Broken, shaken and full of shame.
Regret and pain rejoice in time.
Forever golden burnt at the opportune moment.
past and future, lies before and after the present.
whom shall be feared this horrible gain.

a blade...
renounced as lost in time.
suppressed anger, and hatred.
Innocent and wild.
Plain.

No pain, no gain.
power or remain.
forever. Eternal. Distant.
Lost.
Distance, and Persistance grossed.

© Copyright 2004 Kellie M. Cantrell - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-11-15 08:22 AM


Wonderful writing

Andrew

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2 posted 2004-11-15 05:48 PM


"a blade...
renounced as lost in time.
suppressed anger, and hatred.
Innocent and wild.
Plain."


Loved that part! Nice to see you back around here Kellie!

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3 posted 2004-11-16 11:59 AM


"a blade...
renounced as lost in time.
suppressed anger, and hatred.
Innocent and wild.
Plain."

i agree that part is awesome. i din't really understand the flow but i think i got the meaning. thanks for the write.
Robin

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4 posted 2004-11-16 05:34 PM


what a beautiful poem! and a beautiful picture too!



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Kellie_Cantrell
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5 posted 2004-11-17 12:51 PM


Andrew- Thanks!

Alli- Iam glad you enjoyed this piece as much as I did writing it. I hope that this forum provides me with room to grow as a poet. It is a good place for me to strech my creativity.

Robin- Thank you for commenting. It is nice to meet you. I have had the opportunity to ready some of your work and I enjoyed it.

Dream Child- Thank you for your comments and complements.

Smile

Kellie

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6 posted 2004-11-19 08:24 AM


nice to meet you too!
robin

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