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Kellie_Cantrell
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since 2002-05-22

Posts 1667
New York

0 posted 2004-11-14 11:04 PM

At ease. Rejected and alone.
Tearful at the beginning and the end.
The mark,
marking each translucent moment, from here to die.
Lost in this world, not brave, not scared,
scarred.

Broken, shaken and full of shame.
Regret and pain rejoice in time.
Forever golden burnt at the opportune moment.
past and future, lies before and after the present.
whom shall be feared this horrible gain.

a blade...
renounced as lost in time.
suppressed anger, and hatred.
Innocent and wild.
Plain.

No pain, no gain.
power or remain.
forever. Eternal. Distant.
Lost.
Distance, and Persistance grossed.

Marshalzu

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since 2001-02-15

Posts 2681
Lurking

1 posted 2004-11-15 08:22 AM

Wonderful writing

Andrew

*Alli4000*

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since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

2 posted 2004-11-15 05:48 PM

"a blade...
renounced as lost in time.
suppressed anger, and hatred.
Innocent and wild.
Plain."

Loved that part! Nice to see you back around here Kellie!

~Alli~

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punkrockerrobin

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since 2001-05-15

Posts 1180
Sparks, NV

3 posted 2004-11-16 11:59 AM

"a blade...
renounced as lost in time.
suppressed anger, and hatred.
Innocent and wild.
Plain."

i agree that part is awesome. i din't really understand the flow but i think i got the meaning. thanks for the write.
Robin

hi my name is robin and i am addicted to poetry and matt!
cody saw some pigs so he tried to fly but he fell and went BOOM!

~DreamChild~
Senior Member

since 2001-04-23

Posts 544
in your dreams

4 posted 2004-11-16 05:34 PM

what a beautiful poem! and a beautiful picture too!

~Express Yourself~

Kellie_Cantrell
Senior Member

since 2002-05-22

Posts 1667
New York

5 posted 2004-11-17 12:51 PM

Andrew- Thanks!

Alli- Iam glad you enjoyed this piece as much as I did writing it. I hope that this forum provides me with room to grow as a poet. It is a good place for me to strech my creativity.

Robin- Thank you for commenting. It is nice to meet you. I have had the opportunity to ready some of your work and I enjoyed it.

Dream Child- Thank you for your comments and complements.

Smile

Kellie

punkrockerrobin

Senior Member

since 2001-05-15

Posts 1180
Sparks, NV

6 posted 2004-11-19 08:24 AM

nice to meet you too!
robin

hi my name is robin and i am addicted to poetry and matt!
"and we'll all float on ok....." - modest mouse
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