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~DreamChild~
Senior Member

since 2001-04-23

Posts 544
in your dreams

0 posted 2004-11-13 09:12 PM

a broken heart beats wildly
beneath my aching chest.
its wings tread violently against the winds
of my soul, which cannot rest.

flood rains pour within my mind;
beating like a drum.
emotions mingle with the drops;
as constant as a hum.

my head hangs low in mourning
for the wine i cannot sip.
hallucinations come to life
when i still taste you on my lips.

i think about your every curve;
a place to rest a kiss;
where i can lay my head to dream
as i sleep in heavenly bliss.

so slowly i close my eyes
in an attempt to change the pace,
only to make my blood rush faster,
as i visualize your face.

into your eyes i have fallen
deep into the blue.
yet in my eyes, you've taken flight,
and to my head you flew.

i want to run my fingers
down your cheek and under your chin,
lift your face into my view
and kiss you once again,

take you softly into my arms
and whisper in your ear:
cry no more my sweet princess,
your valiant prince is here.

now i mst awaken
from a dream i'll never leave.
though my eyes may seem to open,
in my heart i'm still asleep.

still clinging onto fanasies
of your gentle, gorgeous smile.
embracing you so tenderly,
forever in a while.

R.I.P. Boo. Forever Lovin U... Love, Derrick

~Express Yourself~

aussie teen
Member

since 2003-09-27

Posts 396
Australia

1 posted 2004-11-14 06:11 AM

OMG!!!!!! this is soooooooo beautiful derrick.... this is so amazing and i know all to well how you feel.... from a chicks point of view....
well done...
Ruth

live life as if your going to die tomorow....... but love as if your going to live forever......

earthdust
Member

since 2003-10-28

Posts 53
predestined and foreknown

2 posted 2004-11-14 03:53 PM

thx 4 sharing.

" Understanding is more valuable than diamonds. If you can understand me, Then you are a very rich person. "

TY!

punkrockerrobin

Senior Member

since 2001-05-15

Posts 1180
Sparks, NV

3 posted 2004-11-16 12:56 PM

wonderful poem very beautiful. thanks for sharing.
robin

hi my name is robin and i am addicted to poetry and matt!
"and we'll all float on ok....." - modest mouse

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