Teen Poetry #7 |
Ye Royal Taxes |
~DreamChild~ Senior Member
since 2001-04-23
Posts 544in your dreams |
hearken all! and hearken none. hail ye many! and hail ye few. tomorrow's sorrows today may borrow, but tonight is interest due... so come all rich, and come too poor, whether healthy or sick, or at deaths door. though the day may break if the payments late , make it a penalty too... both thin and fat cost coat and hat, plus shoes and shirt, for white or black. well the rates are flat with an added tax. of only a nickel or two... ~Express Yourself~ [This message has been edited by ~DreamChild~ (11-13-2004 08:13 PM).] |
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~DreamChild~ Senior Member
since 2001-04-23
Posts 544in your dreams |
HAHAHA! ~Express Yourself~ |
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earthdust Member
since 2003-10-28
Posts 53predestined and foreknown |
hehe... " Understanding is more valuable than diamonds. If you can understand me, Then you are a very rich person. " |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
like this...interesting! ~Alli~ *:.AIM = Alli4000.:* My Journal |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
like this....interesting! ~Alli~ *:.AIM = Alli4000.:* My Journal |
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punkrockerrobin
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
very interesting but good. keep on sharing. robin hi my name is robin and i am addicted to poetry and matt! |
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young_blood Senior Member
since 2003-09-19
Posts 1115Indianapolis, IN |
it was interesting. made me chuckle. |
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~DreamChild~ Senior Member
since 2001-04-23
Posts 544in your dreams |
good! makes me laugh too. |
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Kellie_Cantrell Senior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667New York |
Reminded me a lot about Robin Hood. Very good way of poeticly sharing the feelings of Taxes. Smile |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Some one is studying about the 13 states. lol anywayz, this was interesting. The language was your strong point in the poem, maybe the message was a bit weak, but i had the feeling it was all about the language. good job though. "One good thing about music: when it hits you feel no pain"- Bob Marley ~I am Trance~ |
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~DreamChild~ Senior Member
since 2001-04-23
Posts 544in your dreams |
1.both thin and fat 2.cost coat and hat, plus shoes and shirt 3.for white or black. this is the message in these 3 lines: 1.wealthy or not 2.we'll get all you got 3.there are no differences... |
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