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...Yesterday... |
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A.L Member
since 2003-03-15
Posts 131
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...Yesterday... When I wake up it will all be over, In 10 years I'll look back and laugh, In a couple months I will forget your face, Tomorrow I'll pretend not to care, Just like yesterday, heres another lie... I'll be happy for you, I won't wish you the worst, I thank you for the scars, And the tears and the hate, I'll forget everything about you, Just as I wish you away, And everything for you can be perfect, And I can pretend to believe my lies, I was never a good liar anyways... This will never end, And I will never laugh, Your face doesn't want to leave, Caring never did me any good, I hope your miserable, I wish you the worst pain, All of the tears and all of the hate, Scars to go unhealed, Feelings to go unnoticed, Alone, empty, unwanted, Just like me... Your such a good liar You can make yourself believe, And tomorrow you can wake up, Pretending to forget, Yesterdays feelings... I see me frowning in your eyes... |
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earthdust Member
since 2003-10-28
Posts 53predestined and foreknown |
how nice, you have quite a talent. you express yourself clearly, and i find you breathtaking. i enjoyed this greatly! " Understanding is more valuable than diamonds. If you can understand me, Then you are a very rich person. " |
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A.L Member
since 2003-03-15
Posts 131 |
Thank you for reading  I'm glad you liked it! I see me frowning in your eyes... |
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electricxheart Member
since 2004-09-05
Posts 184far away from home. |
'Your such a good liar You can make yourself believe, And tomorrow you can wake up, Pretending to forget, Yesterdays feelings...' i really loved this. i can relate so well. keep on writing. -kelly i could be an accident, but i'm still trying. |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Just like Kelly, the last stanza was my favorite. This is a great write and I cannot wait to read more from you! :-D ~Alli~ *:.AIM = Alli4000.:* My Journal |
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