Teen Poetry #7 |
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aussie teen Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 396Australia |
to me you are the world to you i am nothing i dont know how you feel anymore and this is killing me inside you dont know how dead i have become again..... i have died without you and you cant even see that.. you cant see anytything in me anymore.... you think i have changed when actually i am exactly the same as i ever was, i am still the same..... to me i am ..... dead..... to you i am ..... different..... i dont know what brought this on but hey here it is...... any comments welcome.... live life as if your going to die tomorow....... but love as if your going to live forever...... |
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WinterWren Senior Member
since 2002-12-01
Posts 1044...Coming to |
I like this, very descriptive. I like the line, "you don't know how dead I have become." I love the end as well. Good work. Thanks for sharing. But Im comforted |
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I_dont_know_me Junior Member
since 2003-12-08
Posts 48UK, Cymru |
this is how i feel right at thsi very moment i couldnt have done it betetr myself thanks for a great read =o) emma x |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Awww sad write! But still great, none the less! ~Alli~ *:.AIM = Alli4000.:* My Journal |
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earthdust Member
since 2003-10-28
Posts 53predestined and foreknown |
very sensual... |
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ShadyMakaveli Member
since 2002-08-21
Posts 128 |
Very well done...I liked this read a lot |
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aussie teen Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 396Australia |
thankyou all so much for replying to this one.... i odnt really know what provoked me to write this.... thankyu all again... Ruth live life as if your going to die tomorow....... but love as if your going to live forever...... |
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~DreamChild~ Senior Member
since 2001-04-23
Posts 544in your dreams |
really enjoyed this... ~Express Yourself~ |
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