Forever Lost In A Broken Compass

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young_blood
Senior Member

since 2003-09-19

Posts 1115
Indianapolis, IN

0 posted 2004-11-10 05:57 PM

Forever Lost In A Broken Compass

Forever is smooth as your hand,
Infinite in its love of the moment.
Turn your eyes to stone
That they may not stray form mine.
Stay tomorrow in little globes,
Slowly spinning on tops of jade.
Lash our hearts together as a raft
Sent to save stranded sinners.
Our love lights hearts of void,
Minds of paranoia, sights offset.
Set your lips to mine,
The horizon to my back.
Direct our movements against the current,
Strong as the wind in our mouths,
Cold as the drowned hearts below.
Slip sweetness onto my tongue and
I may return the favor.
Overboard with the two of us...

earthdust
Member

since 2003-10-28

Posts 53
predestined and foreknown

1 posted 2004-11-12 12:07 PM

your poems are deep...
real deep.
just post one at a time so people have time to digest your material. Then the ones that truly vibe with you can keep up with your work, and neither you nor they will burn out!

" Understanding is more valuable than diamonds. If you can understand me, Then you are a very rich person. "

TY!

young_blood
Senior Member

since 2003-09-19

Posts 1115
Indianapolis, IN

2 posted 2004-11-18 05:18 PM

i post the poems when i write them. thanks for reading.

~DreamChild~
Senior Member

since 2001-04-23

Posts 544
in your dreams

3 posted 2004-11-19 01:36 AM

so how many poems do you write in a day or week? you dont seem to post too often.

shame. i like your work.

young_blood
Senior Member

since 2003-09-19

Posts 1115
Indianapolis, IN

4 posted 2004-11-19 01:43 AM

i used to write a lot, but recently i have been unhappy with how stagnant, unappealing, unoriginal, and boring my poems have become. so i wait on inspiration. thank you for reading.

~DreamChild~
Senior Member

since 2001-04-23

Posts 544
in your dreams

5 posted 2004-11-19 02:11 AM

try rhyming.
a good rhyme can be a great inspiration.
i know how you feel , trust me.

read my next post.
its a repost, but it suits your situation.

punkrockerrobin