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Teen Poetry #7

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Silent Evincar
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since 2003-07-22

Posts 179
Here There and Places Between

0 posted 2003-10-28 01:38 PM

I awake naked surronded by heat
suffocating droplets hang from my brow.

Tasteless walls conceal me
their prescence causes the paranoia.

Knobs release the parasite
slowly shriveling tender skin.

Disorientated screams in trauma
nothing answers the steady insanity.

Feet grow numb to the smooth floor
giving way to a blinding fall.

Velvet rug holds bruised bones
while glancing up towards the plastic curtain.

my_lost_soul
New Member

since 2003-10-28

Posts 6

1 posted 2003-10-28 02:00 PM

cool poem!..It sounds really creepy..hehe..I like it..keep writing=)

PS: I think this happened to me before..

death's always finds my door..

dertah
Senior Member

since 2003-06-18

Posts 584

2 posted 2003-10-28 02:05 PM

well......i hope that this has happened to everyone before. good write dude...haha

Silent Evincar
Member

since 2003-07-22

Posts 179
Here There and Places Between

3 posted 2003-10-28 05:18 PM

Thanks I try to get out of the shower right, but you know how it happens some days.

NJS

Deep_Inside
Member

since 2002-02-14

Posts 377
i can't stop hiding

4 posted 2003-10-28 10:32 PM

this is a good poem i like it a lot it was kindaof funny to me
but it isn't when it happens to you, keep writing

i keeping this one

when you live you begin to die
when you die memories of you life lives in others
when memories of you begin to fade
you truly begin to die

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