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swirls of nostalgia.
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swirls of nostalgia. |
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electricxheart Member
since 2004-09-05
Posts 184far away from home. |
the rolling chair makes my debut music, damn headaches in a swirl of nostalgia. and i seem to be living off of these chop sticks again and flower vases in the corners even though there’s never any sun anymore to welcome anything. i’m starting to choke every time i hear the words (i l o v e y o u). and they always seemed to be whispered underneath my cracks in the door or the october breezes throughout saturday afternoons. and we talk and smile like this has never been our issue before or we sit in silence and i tug at my heartstrings to open up and sing of something important. the rolling chair makes my debut music, damn headaches in a swirl of nostalgia. the memories kill me slowly. more so, than his brown eyes which makes me just want to melt into the depths of the hardwood floor. leaving a puddle, a mark of a heart who is just about to give up and stumble away. and i seem to be living off of these chop sticks again and flower vases in the corners even though there’s never any sun anymore to welcome anything. anything, at all. i could be an accident, but i'm still trying. |
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aussie teen Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 396Australia |
this is beautiful... i love how you have written this... it is like a song..... well done.... going in my library keep them coming electricx Ruth live life as if your going to die tomorow....... but love as if your going to live forever...... |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
I, too, enjoyed it. It really does sound like a song, with the way it flows and how it repeats itself. You have got talent for writing poetry, and I hope you post some more here soon.  ~Alli~ *:.AIM = Alli4000.:* |
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