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confusion (revised) |
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aussie teen Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 396Australia |
this is about my ex who is just back on the scene and im really confused as what i really want... weather its time for me to move on or should i take half a step back and start over again??? any comments or advice is welcome because of you my body is out of order heart and mind going haywire my guts knotting when i see you my skin longing for your touch just once more my mind is confused my heart is blinded by what it used to know my mind listening to my close friends who have said forget you whilst my heart is saying run back to you my mind conflicts with my family is saying do what you think is right ive been told so many things but no one has listened to me you are saying you still love me and i still love you too but i want to go slow and you do to.... everything is looking up but my mind has other ideas its sayin dont trust my heart is screaming you know how he feels my mind comes back re opening the wound that was caused his ex meant more to him i dont know how to say what im rambling about but i know im rambling because of you and i think all im saying is im confusing me sorry about the venting.... but i needed it.. lol:P live life as if your going to die tomorow....... but love as if your going to live forever...... |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
"my mind listening to my close friends who have said forget you whilst my heart is saying run back to you" Cool poem, I can relate...and I liked the above part. Anyways, thanks for the read, great job! Keep Posting!  ~Alli~ *:.AIM = Alli4000.:* |
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aussie teen Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 396Australia |
thanks for the reply alli.... its been ages since ive written and i needed to get rid of the cobwebs... i know ive done better but as i sadi its been ages... cheers for the reply Ruth live life as if your going to die tomorow....... but love as if your going to live forever...... |
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