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C_ROK06
Junior Member

since 2003-10-23

Posts 49

0 posted 2004-10-13 10:23 PM

I am,
Daddies little girl.
Too fragile to play with the boys,
Yet tough enough to make it in a man's world.

I am,
Wild and carefree.
At least, that is what they think of me.
So young,
With my whole life ahead.
Yet too old,
With innocent youth quickly dissappearing behind.

I am,
Trying to stay ahead.
To meet the requirements of this society we live in.
Feeling overwhelmed,
Jst so I can be apart of this never-ending game we call life.

I am,
Struggling everyday with my faith,
My convictions,
My sorrows,
My pain,
Trying to enjoy my time here on Earth,
While respecting my beliefs and curing my hurts.

I am,
A Back, a Mid, a Forward.
Finding a little peace of heaven,
On a rectangular field.
Mind, body, soul,
Intertwined to create this passion I play with.

I am,
Full of thought, emotion, faith,
Flowing freely from deep witin me.
Into my body,
My fingertips,
Finding its way to paper,
In some form or another.

I am,
A girl,
A teenager,
A student,
A Christian,
A soccer freak,
An artist,
Not an (are-tea-st).

I am,
Myself.
Everything I want to be.
Me.

"So let us then try to climb the mountain,not by stepping on what is below us,but to pull us up at what is above us,for my part at the stars"-MCE

kissa~rachelle
Senior Member

since 2003-11-27

Posts 988
nowhere special

1 posted 2004-10-13 10:48 PM

I absolutely loved this. It was amazing.

I like how you had such self...love. It is hard to get, and even harder to keep...atleast for me...

You should sumbit this to sumthing, for those anti-drug commercials or sumthing...

hehehe

That would be kool.

Yeah, like i said before amazing write. Im saving.

Karissa

I ask why, but in my mind,
I find i cant really rely on myself.
~~~Linkin Park~~~

I_dont_know_me
Junior Member

since 2003-12-08

Posts 48
UK, Cymru

2 posted 2004-10-14 01:16 PM

wow your poem blew me away! really powerful i think it would be a good idea for the anti drug thing! good luck
~Emma~

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

3 posted 2004-10-14 04:50 PM

"I am,
A girl,
A teenager,
A student,
A Christian,
A soccer freak,
An artist,"

Yeah, the above part really goes with the anti-drug commercials...

You should send it to them!

Liked your poem...keep on posting...i'm waiting to read more!

~Alli~

*:.AIM = Alli4000.:*
Don’t cry because it’s over, smile because it happened...

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

4 posted 2004-10-15 11:28 PM

Wow, I love this. Im trying so hard to learn to love and accept myself right now, this really helped me alot!
Thanks for sharing.
This is going on my wall.

WinterWren-
Counting stars wishing I was ok,
Crashing down was my biggest mistake.

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