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…And We Dance Till Nowhere…
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…And We Dance Till Nowhere… |
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young_blood Senior Member
since 2003-09-19
Posts 1115Indianapolis, IN 
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…And We Dance Till Nowhere… The Past is always here With a foot on my chest, The Last falls to despair. So I forget it again Like a crumbled fortress, We won’t know how this ends. Take me to the Other-End-Of-Nowhere, Stay awhile. Take me to the End-Of-I-Don’t-Care, Just stay awhile. Bless me, kiss me now With a bullet for your breath, Softly tearing through my brow. Wish me, curse me well, Like one unto sleep’s deth, Please whisper, I won’t tell. Take me to the Other-End-Of-Nowhere, Stay awhile. Take me to the End-Of-I-Don’t-Care, Just stay awhile. Don’t forget me O’er the distance wrought, Just believe You’ll find what’s sought. Stay with me awhile, Stay with me awhile. Take me to the Other-End-Of-Nowhere, Stay awhile. Take me to the End-Of-I-Don’t-Care, Just stay awhile. Come back home… [This message has been edited by young_blood (10-03-2004 07:43 AM).] |
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kissa~rachelle Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988nowhere special |
Why am i always the first person to reply?? You write such amazing songs and poems... Anyways... This reminds me of an old freind of myne. "Take me to the Other-End-Of-Nowhere stay awhile take me to the End-Of-I-Dont-Care just stay awhile." This makes me sad almost...but i like it. Karissa I ask why, but in my mind, I find i cant really rely on myself. ~~~Linkin Park~~~ |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
"Bless me, kiss me now With a bullet for your breath, Softly tearing through my brow. Wish me, curse me well, Like one unto sleep’s, Please whisper, I won’t tell." I just love your poems, and the part above was my favorite. Your writing just leaves me speechless.  ~Alli~ *:.AIM = Alli4000.:* Don’t cry because it’s over, smile because it happened... |
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young_blood Senior Member
since 2003-09-19
Posts 1115Indianapolis, IN |
thank you both for your lovely comments. one of the days i will record my stuff and let you guys hear it. |
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