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It takes one... |
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thinktwice Member
since 2003-12-23
Posts 125United States |
It takes... One small pluck One small gift One small tuck One small lift One wrong turn One wrong face One wrong move One wrong taste One little word One little waste One little turn One little maze One under wraps One under lace One under gasps One under shades One above water One above ground One above laughter One above crowds One between roads One between seasons One between loads One between reasons It takes one... |
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PoeTik JusTice Member
since 2003-01-05
Posts 186California, USA |
I really did like this one! Creative! Obviously repitive, but thats what you were going for! Nice! XoXo Love Alwayz XoXo |
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Lexy Senior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038California |
uuhhhh it was ok. I was kind of annoyed by it |
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thinktwice Member
since 2003-12-23
Posts 125United States |
that insteresting lexy. i found it annoying also. but as always, i posted it. |
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