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im not over you
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im not over you |
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aussie teen Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 396Australia |
i have come to realise that im not over you and i wish that you were here with me so i can slap, scream, rant and rave at you for making me feel like such a fool you said that you love me but if you truly did you wouldnt have left just because of a little bit of distance it made me want to try harder but it made you give up why did you hurt me? why did you leave? why couldnt you try harder? i told you so many times i dont care how often we get to see each other i dont care if you have a car or not i can catch a bus i can scam a lift when life gets difficult i stand up and fight my way through but you have just given up and laid down letting life walk all over you now we are over my heart you stil hold and i want it back so i can start to feel alive i need my heart back either you come back too or send it home by itself because my love i need to start moving on with or without you by my side *this is about my ex boyfriend and its a bit of a vent but i needed it... its my only escape because i can no longer cry over things going bad in my life.* Ruth live life as if your going to die tomorow....... but love as if your going to live forever...... |
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*Belabebeautiful*
since 2003-01-03
Posts 696washington, USA |
Go ahead and rant sweetie, thats what we're here for after all, to listen...good emotions shown in this piece, I liked it for the honesty it portrayed. ~Live and Laugh~ Don't look to me for perfection for I will surely let you down. |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
"I wish that you were here with me so i can slap, scream, rant and rave at you for making me feel like such a fool" My favorite part is the part above. Like Bela said, you rant all you want...sometimes it's just good to get your feelings out. I'm mad at myself for missing this when you first posted it. Better late than never...  Anyway, nice work...thanks for sharing!  ~Alli~ *:.AIM = Alli4000.:* |
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aussie teen Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 396Australia |
thankyou both so much for your replies. even if they are late... :P live life as if your going to die tomorow....... but love as if your going to live forever...... |
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